The occasion of each anxious is affecting our heart, each beautiful story is teasing our affection.

This is affecting the disaster of millions upon millions popular feeling, these by the Chinese nation the affection of flesh and blood deductive story, as animated " example " , place in will receive 2008 before the numerous students of the university entrance exam. Then, we can produce such opinion or guess: The university entrance exam this year writes a composition, I but in order to pass " aseismatic provide disaster relief " does the sense of reality that example writes down him suffer? Or the argument that serves as a composition? How do we prepare to be with this content " topic " or " material " composition...

Yes, face the event of such shock popular feeling, we cannot be apathetic. Regard Chinese as the teacher, I put forward a few views and the classmates that are about to enter the university entrance exam to communicate here.

Become enamoured, it is the most important

What we must be clear about is, aseismatic to at present provide disaster relief this " example " , "Politics division is discussed mediumly " with " the composition in Chinese course " it is two individual character the concept that differs completely character. "The composition in Chinese course " be with " language " for carrier, or elaborate certain viewpoint, or demonstrative certain truth, or emersion certain setting, or express some is planted affection, what it applies is to associate, imagination, inference, argumentation, what it needs is " control language " come out expression of your affection, idea.

So, face this already hold tight person touching, let a person burst into tears to let a person again already of unity is strength " catastrophic " , we cannot be the repeat of touching clue only, also cannot be the emersion of beautiful story only; Cannot be like press, also cannot narrate like communication.

If we write the article that is eristic sex, so we are completely OK " fight calamity " those medium clues, story, touching even language, regard us as strong, advantageous argument. But, what all is is only " explain " your truth, "Argumentation " your viewpoint, that is to say " can use " , but either " must use " or " use certainly " . Valuator (read the person that coil) because,won't be absolutely you " use " aseismatic the content that provide disaster relief and the composition mark that increases you, the main standard that they evaluate or your " truth " whether to say to be clear about, your " viewpoint " whether to get sufficient demonstration, you explain " truth " , argumentation " viewpoint " whether can be the language affected the person, most important is, move only with the real situation, ability moves valuator (read) of the person that coil.

Detail, accumulate containing wonderful

Let us do hypothesis.

If be " material writes a composition " --

We see: The first word after somebody is saved is " thank you " ; Somebody spends a few hours undisturbedly to wait to come to help in remains; Somebody the body with exhaustion is pedestrian a few kilometers, pass the information go out; Somebody to help a person, bearing the distress that loses a dear one by force; Somebody acquired a new life in despair...
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